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Old April 18, 2018, 14:38   #17
Moving Pictures
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Originally Posted by Egavactip View Post
I tried reading this but the way it was written made it unreadable. next time write normally.
@ is a 13-year-old, Int 7 half-orc.

Were I writing from the point of view of a reflective priest, there would likely be descriptions using a far greater range of adjectives.

Or, if creative writing ain't your bag, stop reading.
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