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Old September 24, 2021, 19:04   #60
Quirk
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Originally Posted by Infinitum
The (voices?) part looks like it escaped the editing process. I think "[...]faint voices[...]" flows better myself.

EDIT: Pretty sure Carcaroth's poison fangs are analogous to Eitr given how much Tolkien was influenced by Norse mythology.
Agreed that faint voices would flow better.

I was unaware of Eitr, that's interesting. Thanks for the link.

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Originally Posted by wobbly View Post
Formidable is creating message spam. If you fight a room full of whispering shadows you get constant unaffected message from each of them.
Thanks, will take a look and fix this.
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