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Originally Posted by Infinitum
The (voices?) part looks like it escaped the editing process. I think "[...]faint voices[...]" flows better myself.
EDIT: Pretty sure Carcaroth's poison fangs are analogous to Eitr given how much Tolkien was influenced by Norse mythology.
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Agreed that faint voices would flow better.
I was unaware of Eitr, that's interesting. Thanks for the link.
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Originally Posted by wobbly
Formidable is creating message spam. If you fight a room full of whispering shadows you get constant unaffected message from each of them.
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Thanks, will take a look and fix this.