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Old May 27, 2018, 19:13   #2
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It's a bit verbose, is my only complaint. Here's a suggested condensation: "He can hit to shatter (20d10, 89%), hit to shatter (20d10, 89%), hit to reduce all stats (10d12, 87%), and touch to drain charges (88%), averaging 253 damage.

I definitely would not use the word "total" to describe the damage since that's easy to misread as saying that the maximum damage is 253. I know you mean that you're summing up the damage per attack, I just want to make it harder to misread.
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