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Old November 8, 2011, 16:40   #1
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Grammar quibble

"You feel there are naught but cobwebs here." ...makes me cringe every time I read it.

"Are" should be "Is."
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Old November 8, 2011, 21:02   #2
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Cringe like when "The Creeping copper coins dies"?
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Old November 10, 2011, 16:52   #3
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My grammar quibble is with the ubiquitous:
"The Arrow (1d4) (+0,+0) hit <whatever>"

Since the messages are generally in the present tense, not a retrospective on past events, it seems it should be "hits".
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